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The real issue
What is actually causing the friction, not the symptom you sent us.
A Long & Taylor Service
One problem. A clear direction in 48 hours.
Send us the thing that is stuck: a message, offer, deck, page, proposal, donor ask, sales story, or decision. Within 48 hours, we send back a short written read on what is happening, what needs to change, and the next useful move.
Price
$1,500
Flat · No ongoing commitment
What you get
Four things, written plainly, in 48 hours.
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The first language or structure to test
The sentence, order, or shape most likely to change how it lands.
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Where people are working too hard
The places the current version asks the reader to do your thinking for you.
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Three specific fixes
Concrete changes with the reasoning behind each one, in priority order.
How it works
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Send the thing that is stuck
Use the intake below to tell us what you are trying to fix, where it will be used, and the current version or notes. A few plain sentences are enough.
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We do the read
Within 48 hours we work through it. We identify what is creating friction, what is getting in the reader’s way, and the first thing worth testing.
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You get clear direction
A short written read: the real issue, the language or structure to test first, where people are working too hard, and three specific fixes.
When to use it
Use Message-in-48 when something important is due soon and you need senior outside direction without starting a long engagement.
Get a clear read before the week gets away from you.
Intake
Send your intake
We will read this and send back clear written direction within 48 hours.